Title: Bishoujo Senshi Sera Chibimoon
Series: Bishoujo Senshi Sera Chibimoon Newmoon (BSSCMN)
Author: Hitsuji Kinno
Rated: G
Genre: Romance, Continuation, action, etc. (like the original)
Part: Episode 14
Created: 6/10/2002
Updated: 10/5/2004
E-mail: kim_yoon_mi@yahoo.com

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Japanese Episode 14: The Secrets of Hanako! A Lonley Heart!



FADE IN:

INT./EXT. RANDOM SCENERY NA

SMALL LADY

SMALL LADY'S voice is used.

(FLASHES FROM THIS EPISODE.)

SMALL LADY
(VOICE ONLY): What?! Hanako is being abused by the enemy! What is this? She's being hypnotized! I will not forgive you! In the name of the moon I will punish you!

(FADE OUT)



FADE IN:

EXT. PARK PAST

THE SCREEN STARTS OUT BLACK.

HANAKO
(VOICE ONLY): I remember now....

(THE PICTURE OPENS WITH SOFT PASTELS IN A COLORED PENCIL EFFECT. IT'S SPRING. SAKURA ARE FALLING IN THE FOREGROUND. THERE IS A SMALL HANAKO LAUGHING.)

HANAKO
(VOICE ONLY): It was spring, just before I was going to start my first day at school. Then I saw a sad maiden at the edge of a pond.

(LITTLE HANAKO PEERS INTO A POND. SHE LOOKS UP AND SEES A NUDE MAIDEN IN THE POND CRYING. THE NUDE MAIDEN'S ARMS ARE COVERING HER BREASTS.)

MAIDEN
I can't seem to find my hogoromono... Can you help me find them?

LITTLE HANAKO
(NODDING HER HEAD QUICKLY): Nnnn.

HANAKO
(VOICE ONLY): We looked everywhere. She continued to cry until I found them.

(LITTLE HANAKO POINTS TO THE HAGOROMONO, AND SMILES.)

LITTLE HANAKO
I found the hagoromono! It's pretty! Is it really yours?

MAIDEN
Oh thank you! Thank you so much!

LITTLE HANAKO
Your welcome!

MAIDEN
Since you helped me, and gave back my precious hagoromono, I'll tell you your fortune. You will some day become a beautiful graceful lady. However, there will come a day when you will have to choose between your family and your friends. Heed that day carefully, for it will shape the rest of your life.

(LITTLE HANAKO LOOKS UP CONFUSED.)

HANAKO
(VOICE ONLY): She put on her hagoromono and disappeared into the sky. I never forgot her sad face, or that day. Her sad face sometimes reminds me of myself...I sometimes feel that I am a tennyo without her hagoromono.

(FADE OUT)

(INTRODUCTORY MUSIC: MOON DREAM AND CREDITS PLAYS.)

(TITLE SCREEN: Episode 14: The Secrets of Hanako! A Lonley Heart!)

SMALL LADY
(VOICE ONLY): The Secrets of Hanako! A Lonley Heart!

(FADE OUT)



FADE IN:

INT. CRYSTAL PALACE 19:00

(SMALL LADY, DIANA, SEISHIN, AND HANAKO ARE ALL SITTING AROUND A TABLE.)

SEISHIN
You huge liar! That did not happen!!

(SEISHIN LEANS FORWARD STANDING UP.)

[Hitsuji: This does not convey the rude form of speech that Seishin is using. So here is a loose translation- "Uso! Anta wa okii usotsuki da! Uso ja nai! Kikonakatta!" This would be to someone she does not know, therefore is intended to be rude.]

SMALL LADY
Don't call her a big moon birdfinch!

[Hitsuji: That would be a pun. "Uso" is also birdfinch and "Tsuki" is also moon.]

HANAKO
Yes, that's quite rude! Tis it not true that I, Toshinoh Hanako, am the best beauty and the most graceful? I certainly am more so than the likes of you, whom I have not seen act so gracefully. It's clearly true, Ms. Uchinoh-san.

(HANAKO TOSSES BACK HER HAIR.)

SMALL LADY
(THINKING): I thought that pun would ease the tension.

(SMALL LADY MOANS.)

SMALL LADY
Why can't you get along, like the Senshi from the past?

SEISHIN
She tells nothing but lies! Because of her lies she attracted the enemy!

HANAKO
Twas not my fault. You are definitly lacking in your agility, no? Have you gained weight recently?

SEISHIN
(YELLING): What did you say!

(SMALL LADY SINKS HER HEAD TO THE TABLE.)

SMALL LADY
And I thought Rei and Usagi were bad! Elios, help me!

(A PICTURE OF REI AND USAGI STICKING OUT THEIR TONGUES APPEARS FULL SCREEN AND THEN GROWS SMALLER INTO A THOUGHT BUBBLE.)

DIANA
You have to help yourself Small Lady if you are to become a true lady! You must be able to mend the rift between these two! You are their leader!

SEISHIN
(TO DIANA): I didn't ask you!

HANAKO
You talk quite rudely to a cat of the royal family. I find it dispicable that your manners have so greatly degraded since I saw you last. I fare thee well, I will see you tomorrow in school.

(HANAKO WALKS OFF INTO THE PALACE.)

HANAKO
(THINKING): Hmph! I've never needed friends before, and I most certainly do not need them now. Family is certainly what's important.

(SMALL LADY AND SEISHIN WATCH HANAKO WALK AWAY.)

SMALL LADY

(TO SEISHIN): It's not her fault that she's related to the Toshinoh Family.

SEISHIN
There's no way that she could have met a tennyo.

SMALL LADY
That doesn't matter... we are all senshi... we are a team! Can't we all be friends? Besides, I understand how she feels.

(SMALL LADY RUNS AFTER HANAKO.)

(SEISHIN WATCHES SMALL LADY.)

SEISHIN

I guess I should go too.

DIANA
They will resolve it themselves. I'll go to mama.

(FADE OUT)



FADE IN:

INT A DARK PLACE 19:30

CORALKO
Coral, are you awake?

(CORAL STARES BLANKLY)

CORALKO
Good... then I will get my revenge on the Sailor Senshi.

(IOLITE AND ONYX APPEAR.)

CORAL AND CORALKO
You collected some good energy... now we must collect more before going to our next phase.

ONYX
Alright! Yes, mistress.

CORAL AND CORALKO
I have learned of a weakness... bring along Gall Tennyo. She's special.

(IOLITE AND ONYX DISAPEAR.)

CORALKO
Hmph. I hope the captured soul of that tennyo will help out, if those two don't screw it up.

(FADE OUT)



FADE IN:

(COMMERCIAL BREAK)

(FADE OUT)



FADE IN:

EXT. CRYSTAL TOKYO 20:00

(HANAKO IS WALKING TOWARDS HER HOUSE WITH SMALL LADY IN THE DISTANCE RUNNING AFTER HER.)

HANAKO
(THINKING): It's always been this way. I've always been judged by my surname.

FADE TO:

INT. A CLASSROOM THE PAST

(A YOUNG HANAKO IS STANDING IN FRONT OF THE CLASS.)

GIRL 1
Isn't that the snotty Toshinoh's?

GIRL 2
No one will want to be friends with her.

(THE YOUNG HANAKO HIDES HER SADNESS UNDER A GENTLE SMILE.)

(FADE TO ORIGINAL SCENE.)

(HANAKO KEEPS WALKING.)

HANAKO
I was niave to think that anyone would truly like me for who I am.

(HANAKO'S EYES TURN SAD.)

HANAKO
It's very much like how Tomomi betrayed me.

(SMALL LADY STARTS TO CATCH UP TO HANAKO.)

(A LADY IN A TUNIC APPROCHES HANAKO.)

(A GREEN COCOON APPEARS IN THE AIR ABOVE ON A SIDE STREET AND GRADUALLY GROWS. THE INSIGNIA OF THE CABACHONS APPEARS IN RED ON THE OUTSIDE. THE COCOON WIGGLES UNTIL IT GLOWS GREEN. THE COCOON BURSTS OPEN.)

(GALL TENNYO TURNS INTO A LADY WEARING A TUNIC.)

LADY
Have you seen my hagoromono?

HANAKO
(THINKING): She must be a tennyo....

HANAKO
What does it look like?

(RAGE CONSUMES THE LADY AND SHE TURNS BACK INTO GALL TENNYO WEARING ONLY A TUNIC.)

GALL TENNYO
Then, you stole it! If you stole it, you must die.

HANAKO
I am not a man! Besides, no Tennyo is ungraceful as that! Ceres Crystal Power, Make up!

(HANAKO TRANSFORMS INTO SAILOR CERES.)

GALL TENNYO
Since you won't tell me where the Hagoromono is, Celestial Confusion!

(SAILOR CERES SLOWLY COLLAPSES TO THE GROUND.)

(SMALL LADY CATCHES UP TO THE SCENE AND SEES SAILOR CERES ON THE GROUND. SHE STANDS IN BETWEEN SAILOR CERES AND GALL TENNYO. SHE FACES GALL TENNYO.)

(SMALL LADY TRANSFORMS INTO ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON.)

ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON
You attacked an innocent girl that wanted to help you! I cannot forgive you! I am the pretty sailor-suited solider for love and justice, Sailor Chibimoon! In the name of the moon I will punish you!

(CUT TO SAILOR VESTA, WHO APPEARS OUT OF NOWHERE.)

SAILOR VESTA
...and I am Sailor Vesta, in the name of the asteriod Vesta, I will punish you!

(ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON STEPS BACK IN DISBELIEF.)

ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON
Ehh? When did you arrive?

SAILOR VESTA
A few seconds ago. I decided that you might be right. Just MIGHT be.

GALL TENNYO
Have you seen my hagoromono?

ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON
(CONFUSED): No, I haven't!

GALL TENNYO
You stole it! You must die!

(GALL TENNYO ATTACKS ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON HEAD FIRST.)

(ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON DODGES.)

(SAILOR VESTA SLOWLY GOES TO SAILOR CERES AND THEN PROPS HER UP.)

GALL TENNYO
Don't worry about her...

(SAILOR CERES GETS UP AND THERE ARE NO PUPILS IN HER EYES.)

SAILOR CERES
I have no friends. Friends will only betray, family is what is important.

GALL TENNYO
I took her soul. I will punish her for taking my hagoromono!

ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON
I'm your friend, Sailor Ceres! Family and friends are equally important!

SAILOR CERES
Family never betrays you.

(SAILOR VESTA LOOKS AT HER GUILTILY.)

SAILOR VESTA
I don't have any family. I didn't have any friends until I met Eternal Sailor Chibimoon.... don't you feel that way too?

SAILOR CERES
I need to choose...

FADE TO:

INT. A CLASSROOM THE PAST
(YOUNG HANAKO IS SITTING IN A CORNER ALONE. A GIRL APPROCHES HER AND SMILES.)

TOMOMI
Hi! If you want I will be your friend. The other girls are being mean.

(YOUNG HANAKO SMILES BRIGHTLY.)

FADE TO:

EXT. THE PARK THE PAST

(TOMOMI AND YOUNG HANAKO ARE RUNNING AROUND IN THE PARK.)

TOMOMI
I'm glad that your mom came with us! She's really nice.

YOUNG HANAKO
Yes!

TOMOMI
I'm going to climb that Tree over there, OK?

YOUNG HANAKO
It's too high for me. I'll get my mom.

(YOUNG HANAKO IS BETWEEN HER MOTHER AND TOMOMI WHEN SHE HEARS A SCREAM COME FROM THE TREE. HER MOTHER IS CLENCHING HER CHEAST. HANAKO LOOKS BACK AND FORTH BETWEEN TOMOMI AND HER MOTHER.)

(THE PICTURE BECOMES SKEWED AND THE SOUND OF HER HEART BEATING BECOMES LOUDER. THE PICTURE BECOMES BLACK. IT OPENS BACK UP TO HANAKO HELPING HER MOTHER. SHE LOOKS AT HER FRIEND ON THE GROUND. HANAKO SCREAMS.)

FADE TO:

EXT. CRYSTAL TOKYO THE PRESENT

(ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON BATTLES GALL TENNYO ONE ON ONE. SHE JUMPS OUT OF THE WAY OF HER ATTACKS, AND THEN KICKS GALL TENNYO.)

ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON
(TO SAILOR VESTA): I need your help.

(SAILOR VESTA IS ATTACKED BY SAILOR CERES.)

SAILOR VESTA
(TO ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON): I'm a little occupied right now!

SAILOR CERES
Friends only betray!

SAILOR VESTA
I'm sorry for what I said earlier, OK?

FADE TO:

INT. THE CLASSROOM THE PAST

(A GROUP OF GIRLS GATHER IN THE CORNER AND ARE LAUGHING.)

GIRL 1
Didn't she kill her only friend?

GIRL 2
It's her fault that Tomomi fell from that tree. She picked her mother over her own best friend!

GIRL 3
Well, I'm not going to eat with her anymore. She's just like a Toshinoh!

(HANAKO SITS IN THE CORNER QUIETLY. SHE HIDES A TEAR THAT SLIPS DOWN HER CHEEK.)

FADE TO:

EXT. CRYSTAL TOKYO THE PRESENT

SAILOR VESTA
I want to be your friend.... and not because you're a Toshinoh.

ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON
Me too!

(GALL TENNYO GRABS ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON FROM THE BACK. ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON SCREAMS.)

(SAILOR CERES TURNS HER HEAD TOWARDS GALL TENNYO. HER EYES TURN BACK TO NORMAL.)

SAILOR CERES
Sailor Vesta, Eternal Sailor Chibimoon, let's fight together!

(BOTH SAILOR CERES AND SAILOR VESTA WARM UP FOR AN ATTACK.)

(ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON BACK KICKS GALL TENNYO AND GETS FREE. SHE RUNS OFF.)

SAILOR CERES
Petal Avatar!

SAILOR VESTA
Lash Burn!

(SAILOR CERES'S PETALS COIL AROUND SAILOR VESTA'S LASH AND HIT GALL TENNYO. THE PETALS BURN UP IN A TORRENT OF FIRE.)

(GALL TENNYO FLINCHES AS THE TUNIC BURNS OFF.)

SAILOR CERES
I'm sorry Lady Tennyo, but I must remind you of who you are. You never lost your hagoromono. It's inside of you. You're ability to fly to heaven is still in you, but you've forgotten.

(THE TENNYO PROTESTS.)

SAILOR CERES
Heal her Eternal Sailor Chibimoon, please!

ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON
Heal? Alright, then! Pink Starlight Honeymoon Healing Kiss!

(LIGHT PINK DUST FALLS DOWN ON GALL TENNYO.)

(THE TENNYO'S HAGOROMONO APPEARS. SHE SMILES BEFORE LOOKING UP AND DISAPPEARING.)

SAILOR CERES
(WHISPERING): It's exactly as I remember it.

(ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON HUGS SAILOR CERES.)

ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON
I'll always be your friend.

SAILOR VESTA
(RELUCTANTLY): Me too.

FADE TO:

EXT. THE PARK THE PAST

(TOMOMI IS AT THE BASE OF THE TREE SHE FELL FROM. YOUNG HANAKO HOLDS HER HAND AS THE PARAMEDICS COME IN.)

(YOUNG HANAKO LOOKS AT TOMOMI'S FACE.)

TOMOMI
(VOICE ONLY): I don't care if you're a Toshinoh! To me, you're just Hanako and I want to be your friend forever!

(FADE OUT)

EXT. CRYSTAL TOKYO 21:00

(IT'S DARK OUTSIDE. THE SOFT LIGHTS OF THE STREETLIGHTS LINE THE STREET. CRYSTAL TOKYO IS LIT UP. THE VARIOUS CRYSTAL TOWERS ARE LIT UP FROM THE INSIDE. A SOFT LIGHT PERDOMINATES. SMALL LADY, DIANA, SEISHIN, AND HANAKO ARE ALL WALKING TOWARDS HANAKO'S HOUSE.)

SMALL LADY
So, that's why you need money, for Tomomi-san's operation?

(HANAKO SMILES.)

HANAKO
Also my allowance won't keep me up-to-date on the latest trends in clothes!

(SEISHIN SIGHS.)

SMALL LADY
But still, you are a good person!

DIANA
Small Lady... but she still spends on clothes.

SMALL LADY
I don't know how you found us... but I should tell you that you're sounding like Luna-chan!

(DIANA BLUSHES.)

HANAKO
Tomomi-chan will get better soon. I want to visit her and take her shopping. Oh! You and Seishin must come shopping with me! We can improve Seishin's wardrobe quite a bit. There's also a new season to shop for.

(SEISHIN GRUMBLES.)

(HANAKO, SEISHIN, AND SMALL LADY ARRIVE AT THE GATE OF THE TOSHINOH RESIDENCE. THE PICTURE FREEZES.)

HANAKO
(VOICE ONLY): The Tennyo from my childhood was right-- I did have to choose, but Tomomi was right, too. So, I chose both.

(FADE OUT)

(ENDING MUSIC: MOON MYSTERY AND CREDITS PLAYS.)


(ON THE NEXT BISHOUJO SENSHI SAILOR CHIBIMOON SEQUENCE)

FADE IN:

INT./EXT. RANDOM SCENERY NA

SMALL LADY

SMALL LADY, DIANA, use their voice only.

SMALL LADY
(VOICE ONLY): Who is that? She looks strange riding a motorcycle like a man. She kind of reminds me of Haruka on a motorcycle.

DIANA
(VOICE ONLY): I am sensing something from her... Could she be a Senshi?!

SMALL LADY
(VOICE ONLY): She just transfered to our school, Diana! Does the school board allow motorcycles? If not, in the name of the moon I'll have to punish her.

(TITLE SCREEN- A biker girl? She's the next Sailor Soldier?)

SMALL LADY
(VOICE ONLY): Sailor Chibimoon Newmoon: A biker girl? She's the next Sailor Soldier?

SMALL LADY
(VOICE ONLY): Tsuki no Hikari wa Ai no Message.

(ENDING SCREEN WITH MANGAKA AND THE COMPANIES INVOLVED.)

(FADE OUT)

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Author Notes:

- Tennyo: Literally, Heavenly person. There are several legends around the world that are simular to this, much like the story of Cinderella has versions world-wide. Basically, a maiden comes to earth to bathe/explore, and then to get back to heaven/clothes she needs her skin/clothes/whatever. A man usually takes the clothes and hides them, because he falls in love with her beauty, and in typical man fashion hijacks what she cares about, not caring about her feelings, and makes her bear her children, and turns her into a domestic goddess. (*jk*ing of course!) She must bear three children for the man to keep his wife, however, he inevidably fails in one aspect or another (This part varies a bit), and he's left alone on Earth to suffer his mistakes.

- I know, people are going to gripe over Tomomi... well, it was good for a while.

- You should be adapting to the script style by now.

- I did do a few Toei-teki things, like combining attacks, and flat characterization. I hope your are getting the first feeling of R, with some competancy.

- Oh, and people are going to object to the nudity. Well, tough luck! It wasn't sexual, and it was tasteful as the original series. I mean, the Statue of David is still a piece of art, and last time I checked, anime is also a medium.

Also check out the website for omake, and other extras:
http://bsscm.takeuchi-naoko.com/